Time to go

Because the day we started our story
We unleashed our deep secrets
We manifested our love on plates
We cried on each other shoulders
We fought and cursed in anger
We finished too soon
The saga screamed in pain
And we unfurled our wings to fly away from it
Only to be swept back by the current
Back to where we started
Back to the awkward glances and stiff smiles
And the monotonous conversations
The lords smiled at our innocence
And we basked in their glow
Until it was time to go again
As the sun set down the horizon
I looked at you and smiled
I love you more I said
And then you leaned closely and whispered
No stupid, you said
I’ll always love you more.

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13 Comments Add yours

  1. Zubaida basrai says:

    I Loved It So Much❀️

    Liked by 1 person

  2. wow..beautifully written..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Adt Patel says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

      Like

  3. Wonderful. The impulse to leave is strong, but some time there are forces that are stronger. The ending is so down to earth in a great way.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Adt Patel says:

      Thank you. Yes, there are greater powers to the world than what are visible to us. To leave is what we never want but one day, we all have to return back home. Thank you so much πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Pleasure πŸ™‚
        Could you review my story in the below link
        https://pavanmedheramitla.wordpress.com/2015/10/04/princess-and-the-snake-part-1/?preview=true
        I get a strong sense of belief about your review skills πŸ™‚

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  4. hooklineandinkwell says:

    a beautiful piece

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Adt Patel says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

      1. hooklineandinkwell says:

        You are welcome πŸ˜€

        Liked by 1 person

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